User talk:Yummy soccer

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SW:1RV[edit]

I highly advise you read this. I've seen you edit war a couple times before and I'm getting sick of undoing the same edits over and over. This will be your only warning. If you persist, you will be given a short block from editing the wiki. Thank you for your time and have a great day. Disaster Flare DisasterFlareValentineSig.png (talk) 16:12, 12 March 2017 (EDT)

Professional wiki writing[edit]

Ok, so, I have noticed that your edits are under par. Like...way...under par. When editing, your spelling, grammar, and word choice need to be professional. Casual writing has no place here. Also, please read our manual of style. You have made several mistakes here. I will lay out one edit here, then correct it so you can see the difference:

Your edit

+Link's grab range is reduced to the 2 longest in melee to 6 longest in brawl,his infinite sword starb in neutral combo is removed,is new side-special is considered less efective in every single way,is new tether recovery and recovery opcions is worse,Spin attack is weaker unless it is charged and is worse for recovery and the loss of L-cancelling making imposible to reduce the lag of his aerials including is down-air-is best K.O move- a mid-tier character in melee he is current in bottom 35.

Corrected edit

  • Link's grab range is reduced from being the second longest reaching in Melee to sixth longest in Brawl. Link's tether recovery is also made worse, owing to the fact that it must hit an edge, as opposed to any wall. Spin Attack is weaker unless it is charged and is worse for recovery, and Gale Boomerang is considered a downgrade from Boomerang in general, due to the removal of the returning hit and being generally slower. The loss of L-cancelling significantly harms Link's down air and up air, as he is no longer able to act quickly out of either attack. To top it off, Link loses his infinite neutral attack.

I fixed several grammar and spelling mistakes, fixed a few layout issues, fixed a tone problem, and linked to all the appropriate articles. This is what we require. Please take this into consideration when editing, thank you. Serpent SKSig.png King 21:27, 12 March 2017 (EDT)

Grammar[edit]

Your grammar, after many times users have had to help you correct it, is still mediocre. I suggest you really work on your grammar before editing. --BeepYouSignature.png Beep (talk) 13:47, 21 May 2017 (EDT)