User contributions for AlteredBest
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January 1, 2025
- 11:4711:47, January 1, 2025 diff hist −14 Ridley (SSBU) →Tier placement and history: Fixing a whole ton of grammar & usage problems in one sentence current
- 11:4511:45, January 1, 2025 diff hist −5 Ridley (SSBU) →Tier placement and history: impact on, not impact towards
- 11:4511:45, January 1, 2025 diff hist −8 Ridley (SSBU) →Tier placement and history: clarity through gerund reduction
- 11:3711:37, January 1, 2025 diff hist +108 N User:AlteredBest Created page with "Hello, world! ~~~~" current
- 11:3711:37, January 1, 2025 diff hist +517 Talk:2020 Super Smash Bros. sexual misconduct allegations No edit summary
October 2, 2021
- 06:1806:18, October 2, 2021 diff hist −3 Ridley (SSBU) →In competitive play: presumably, as the sentence is gibberish as currently written
- 06:1606:16, October 2, 2021 diff hist −12 Ridley (SSBU) →Attributes: gateways are not nebulous, and descriptions of fighters per tier do not "hover, typically or in any other fashion
- 06:1506:15, October 2, 2021 diff hist −1 m Ridley (SSBU) →Attributes: grammar
- 05:5105:51, October 2, 2021 diff hist +21 List of spirits (Mega Man series) move other trivia to "Other trivia" section
- 05:4905:49, October 2, 2021 diff hist −1 List of spirits (Mega Man series) →Spirit Battles: grammar (no comma before independent clause)
- 05:4805:48, October 2, 2021 diff hist +7 List of spirits (Mega Man series) clarify which attack is meant
- 05:4705:47, October 2, 2021 diff hist +73 List of spirits (Mega Man series) presumably (as these boxes are meant to explain how the battle references the character, not how it DOESN'T (as that list would be infinitely long for each one!)
- 05:3105:31, October 2, 2021 diff hist −3 Steve (SSBU) →Role in World of Light: not sure what the editor thought "legitimate" meant; it's not like Steve has a role in the game mode, but it's an illegal role somehow... "defined" is correct
- 05:3005:30, October 2, 2021 diff hist −5 Steve (SSBU) →In competitive play: see other edit descriptions; nothing is "very unique"; it's either unique or it's not. An analogy might be "very absent": something is either there or it's not. It can't be "very" not there.
- 05:2505:25, October 2, 2021 diff hist −1 Steve (SSBU) →Attributes: "Minecraft-revolving" would mean his playstyle revolves Minecrafts, that is, it's gibberish; I think the editor must have been trying to craft a neologism such as "Minecraft-revolve-around-ing" or something similar, which is better phrased this way, as, well, English...
- 05:2305:23, October 2, 2021 diff hist −5 Steve (SSBU) →Attributes: some editor really enjoyed their melodramatic hyperbole here...! "very" is not needed; if it's underwhelming, it's underwhelming.
- 05:2105:21, October 2, 2021 diff hist +1 Steve (SSBU) →Attributes: Ha! Wow, didn't even see this when I wrote description for my last comment... but, yeah, something can't be "more" or "less" unique. It's either unique (one-of-a-kind) or not. In every case, "most unique" should be "most unusual".
- 05:1905:19, October 2, 2021 diff hist −5 Steve (SSBU) →Attributes: Nothing can be "very unremarkable" any more than it can be "very unique"; something is either remarkable (worth remark) or not
- 05:1205:12, October 2, 2021 diff hist +8 Kirby →Trivia: As previously written, this sentence said Kirby was both 20 cm and 1.9 cm; the correct symbol here is also ~, meaning "approximately", not ≈, which is a mathematical operator between two values (x≈2, for instance)
- 05:0905:09, October 2, 2021 diff hist −13 Kirby →Trivia: (1) "dwarfed", not "dwarved", and (2) "dwarfed... by Olimar" would mean that Olimar was BIGGER than Kirby, not the other way around
