User talk:SuperPeachy

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Hi there!

Welcome!

Welcome to our wiki, and thank you for your contributions! There's a lot to do around here, so I hope you'll stay with us and make many more improvements.

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I'm really happy to have you here, and look forward to working with you!

Black Vulpine of the Furry Nation. Furries make the internets go! :3 12:36, 10 August 2018 (EDT)


However...

Please have a read of our Manual of Style before continuing. In particular, you have been writing in second and first person at various points of the wiki. All descriptions given on any wiki must be written in third-person only. Thank you. Black Vulpine of the Furry Nation. Furries make the internets go! :3 12:36, 10 August 2018 (EDT)

Regarding your changes

I can see you're putting a lot of effort into your additions, and that is very good of you. However, I am spending half the time fixing your formatting and grammar errors (much like what Black Vulpine mentioned above with your tone and first-person descriptions).

I really do advise you read what he sent you, and try to follow the format of pages: for example, it is not necessary to capitalize moves like Down Smash (just write down smash), and you definitely shouldn't write run-on sentences or predict combos that can't be tested ("When close to an opponent(,) Mario’s Fireballs can multi-hit which can lead up to new combos").

Essentially, good job but make sure your additions aren't a chore for others to clean up. Mexi (talk) 18:22, 10 August 2018 (EDT)

There's still mistakes being made so I'll help you clarify. Attacks that have an official name that aren't generic should have their first letters capitalized (eg. special attacks such as Upperdash Arm). Attacks or words that are a general term for moves or attributes should not be capitalized at all (eg. dash, falling speed, air speed, up tilt, forward smash, stuff like that). One of the few exceptions is "Final Smash", which should always be capitalized cause it's a term for a significant special move. Mexi (talk) 20:07, 10 August 2018 (EDT)
Response: Hi I'm superpeachy and what I'm really doing is I'm reviewing videos of the characters and analyzing what happened to some of their moveset sorry if you think I'm not doing a great job.
No worries, I'm just giving constructive criticism so there isn't a need to double edit your edits. You're doing a fine job, but you just need some time to understand the formatting of the wiki. For now the best thing to do is not to specify combos and "guesswork" like "this may be a combo starter". Also, sign your posts with four tildes on talk pages (four ~). Mexi (talk) 20:53, 10 August 2018 (EDT)

Hey I just want to say this for characters that aren’t in the demo I see some buffs and nerfs for each character from their character trailers and from the August 8 direct go check in them and then you’ll see what I mean by some of the moveset.

Regarding your response on my user page

I noted you posted this on my talk page:

"Response:Let me say this for characters that are not in the demo I’m trying to see what buffs and nerfs those characters have from the direct and their character trailer."

Again, that's fine, but but the problem is you have to follow formats. First off, you've already shown lack of following format by putting a new response in an older post. I was extremely confused and I had to fix it myself, on my own talk page. You're also forgetting to sign your posts again.

Also, we aren't supposed to speculate. Things such as "oh he may be more vulnerable to combos" are completely untestable till the game's release. There's literally a warning above the attributes section for this. A lot of your edits are being reverted cause they are being far too speculative (you literally can't test them), and there's only so much we can confirm in Directs and character trailers. Mexi (talk) 22:55, 11 August 2018 (EDT)

You do have a point sorry :(