User contributions for Patrick.oldeloohuis

February 12, 2019

• 05:4205:42, February 12, 2019 diff hist +4‎ m Solid Snake ‎ I indented Super Smash Bros. Ultimate in the head paragraph.
• 05:4105:41, February 12, 2019 diff hist +89‎ Solid Snake ‎ I modified the head paragraph to specify that Snake was the first third-party character in the Smash Bros. franchise, appearing in both Brawl and Ultimate.
• 05:0605:06, February 12, 2019 diff hist −18‎ Halberd ‎ I unlinked Meta Knight and King Dedede in "Role of the Subspace Emissary" and changed "it's" to "it is" in Brawl Trophy Description.
• 04:5504:55, February 12, 2019 diff hist −4‎ m Halberd ‎ I unlinked Kirby Super Star in Origin because it had already been linked twice in the article.

February 5, 2019

• 04:3404:34, February 5, 2019 diff hist −2‎ m Princess Zelda ‎ In the third paragraph of "Character description," I changed "evident with the fact" to "evident by the fact."
• 04:3104:31, February 5, 2019 diff hist +11‎ Princess Zelda ‎ At the top, I erased "sometimes" before "love interest" and changed "Zeldas
• 03:4503:45, February 5, 2019 diff hist −2‎ Link ‎ In Link's Brawl description, I changed "their" to "his" because only Link is mentioned.
• 03:3403:34, February 5, 2019 diff hist −2‎ m Link ‎ In the final paragraph of "Character description," I put "before dying" at the end of the sentence to remove the commas and give the sentence a better flow.
• 03:1403:14, February 5, 2019 diff hist +2‎ Palutena's Temple ‎ I made grammar modifications to the second paragraph of the "Origin" section.

January 26, 2019

• 06:5706:57, January 26, 2019 diff hist −8‎ Link ‎ I erased a comma between "several" and "distinct" and changed "courageousness" to "courage" in the top paragraph.
• 06:5406:54, January 26, 2019 diff hist 0‎ m Ganondorf ‎ I corrected the spelling of "thieves" in "Character description."
• 06:5206:52, January 26, 2019 diff hist 0‎ m Ganondorf ‎ I put a dash in between "power" and "hungry" in the first paragraph of "Character description."
• 06:4106:41, January 26, 2019 diff hist −1‎ m Warlock Punch ‎ In "Super Smash Bros. Brawl," I removed the dash between "mid" and "air."
• 06:3906:39, January 26, 2019 diff hist 0‎ m Warlock Punch ‎ In "Origin," I changed "side-effect" to "side effect."
• 06:3206:32, January 26, 2019 diff hist +7‎ m Falcon Punch ‎ In "Trivia" I changed "his facing direction" to "what direction he is facing."
• 06:2606:26, January 26, 2019 diff hist −1‎ m Falcon Punch ‎ I erased the comma between "slow" and "but" at the top of the page.
• 06:2406:24, January 26, 2019 diff hist +3‎ Captain Falcon ‎ I made many grammar adjustments to "Trivia" and a spelling adjustment from "charcter" to "character."
• 06:1006:10, January 26, 2019 diff hist +2‎ Ancient Minister ‎ I made a few grammar adjustments to the first paragraph of "Post-Subspace Emissary."
• 06:0706:07, January 26, 2019 diff hist +36‎ Ancient Minister ‎ I made several grammar and spelling corrections, and added Captain Falcon's name next to the Falcon Flyer to clarify that it is his.
• 06:0206:02, January 26, 2019 diff hist +9‎ m Ancient Minister ‎ I edited the last sentence of the first paragraph of "During the Subspace Emissary" by giving context on how the R.O.B.s died and avoided saying "R.O.B. units" twice.
• 05:5705:57, January 26, 2019 diff hist −11‎ Ancient Minister ‎ I changed "turns out" to "transpires" in the first paragraph, and shortened the last sentence by saying he was forced to carry out Tabuu's orders instead of saying he regretted what he did.

January 19, 2019

• 20:2020:20, January 19, 2019 diff hist +69‎ Mario (SSBB) ‎ I edited the bottom paragraph of "Story merge," revising the structure and adding new elements to the story not mentioned, such as how the heroes entered Subspace.
• 20:1220:12, January 19, 2019 diff hist +3‎ m Mario (SSBB) ‎ I changed "Mario and friends" to "Mario and the others."
• 20:1120:11, January 19, 2019 diff hist +3‎ Mario (SSBB) ‎ I edited the "F" in "false character" to make it lowercase to avoid two consecutive capital letters at the beginning of the sentence, I changed "it's" to "it is the real Peach," and I put a comma in front of "Fortunately."
• 20:0720:07, January 19, 2019 diff hist +3‎ m Mario (SSBB) ‎ I changed "Mario and friends" to "Mario and the others."
• 20:0420:04, January 19, 2019 diff hist +2‎ Mario (SSBB) ‎ I edited the "F" in "false character" to make it lowercase to avoid two consecutive capital letters at the beginning of the sentence, I changed "it's" to "it is the real Peach," and I put a comma in front of "Fortunately."
• 19:5219:52, January 19, 2019 diff hist −3‎ Mario (SSBB) ‎ I changed "a trophy" to "trophies" of Mario and Kirby, I erased the dash between "vice" and "versa," I switched the words "red" and "ominous" around, I changed "it" to "them" in the same sentence, and removed "the" from between "seeing" and "two."
• 06:3806:38, January 19, 2019 diff hist +1‎ m PSI Magnet ‎ In the last paragraph of the "tactical uses" section, I changed the word "incredible" to "significant" and changed "it's" to "it is" to make it sound more professional.
• 06:3406:34, January 19, 2019 diff hist −31‎ PSI Magnet ‎No edit summary
• 06:1906:19, January 19, 2019 diff hist 0‎ m Porky Minch ‎No edit summary
• 06:1306:13, January 19, 2019 diff hist −9‎ R.O.B. ‎No edit summary
• 06:0106:01, January 19, 2019 diff hist +7‎ R.O.B. ‎No edit summary
• 05:4305:43, January 19, 2019 diff hist −4‎ m Subspace ‎No edit summary
• 05:4005:40, January 19, 2019 diff hist +2‎ Tabuu ‎No edit summary
• 05:1505:15, January 19, 2019 diff hist −17‎ Tabuu ‎No edit summary
• 05:1005:10, January 19, 2019 diff hist +7‎ Tabuu ‎No edit summary