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:I don't speak for everyone, but here's what I think:
:I don't speak for everyone, but here's what I think:
:#More literal would be nice. I'd like to see as little translation bias as possible.
:#More literal would be nice. I'd like to see as little translation bias as possible.
:::* Will do. But just so you know I will most likely translate it in a way that's a bit more interesting to read, as if it were a Wiki article or game manual, rather than just doing it in a purely simple manner.
:#Gameplay stuff should come first. Things like the preface can come afterwards; I personally consider it more of a "phase 2". The reams of fanmail would be an optional bonus (who knows, maybe something really juicy's in there, but there's so much of it...).
:#Gameplay stuff should come first. Things like the preface can come afterwards; I personally consider it more of a "phase 2". The reams of fanmail would be an optional bonus (who knows, maybe something really juicy's in there, but there's so much of it...).
:::*Alrighty. In nature I'm more of a "A to Z" type of guy, but I understand if you want the important stuff translated first.
:#Basically, just me. And I don't even know any Japanese, I'm just doing a lot of patchwork with Google Translate and websites that tell me some basic meanings of kanji and the alphabet of hirigana/katakana.
:#Basically, just me. And I don't even know any Japanese, I'm just doing a lot of patchwork with Google Translate and websites that tell me some basic meanings of kanji and the alphabet of hirigana/katakana.
:::*Well glad I came here to help, this project could definitely use some support.
:#Slowly, but not badly.
:#Slowly, but not badly.
:::*You were doing a great job pulling all of this off by the way.
:#There are two main reasons things are currently translated by-the-line:
:#There are two main reasons things are currently translated by-the-line:
:#*The rollovers to see the original text aren't too long. (We could always just scrap that, but I think it's useful to readers who happen along and think "hey, I know a better way to put that".)
:#*The rollovers to see the original text aren't too long. (We could always just scrap that, but I think it's useful to readers who happen along and think "hey, I know a better way to put that".)
:#*The formatting and line count can be kept very similar.
:#*The formatting and line count can be kept very similar.
::::*Okay, if that's how it is then I'll follow the sentence-by-sentence structure as best as I can. Keep in mind though, that there will probably be breaks in-between sentences that may look a bit awkward because of the formatting. I'll try my best to avoid them though.
::The accuracy highlights I think should stay even if things are translated in paragraphs, since it warns readers of sections we currently aren't too sure on. [[User:Toomai|Toomai]] [[User talk:Toomai|Glittershine]] [[Image:Toomai.png|20px|link=User:Toomai/Bin|???]] Da Bomb 19:26, 13 September 2013 (EDT)
::The accuracy highlights I think should stay even if things are translated in paragraphs, since it warns readers of sections we currently aren't too sure on. [[User:Toomai|Toomai]] [[User talk:Toomai|Glittershine]] [[Image:Toomai.png|20px|link=User:Toomai/Bin|???]] Da Bomb 19:26, 13 September 2013 (EDT)
 
:::*For the most part I will rarely highlight something that I'm not sure on, but the accuracy system is definitely useful for editing. Now that a lot of Japanese speakers are involved in this though, I don't think it would be as necessary. I guess I'm just very eager to having something official and ready to be published. I'll use this system to my advantage anyway since it's a really useful one. --[[User:NefariousShyGuy|NefariousShyGuy]] ([[User talk:NefariousShyGuy|talk]]) 21:05, 13 September 2013 (EDT)
::# Will do. But just so you know I will most likely translate it in a way that's a bit more interesting to read, as if it were a Wiki article or game manual, rather than just doing it in a purely simple manner.
::#Alrighty. In nature I'm more of a "A to Z" type of guy, but I understand if you want the important stuff translated first.
::#Well glad I came here to help, this project could definitely use some support.
::#You were doing a great job pulling all of this off by the way.
::#Okay, if that's how it is then I'll follow the sentence-by-sentence structure as best as I can. Keep in mind though, that there will probably be breaks in-between sentences that may look a bit awkward because of the formatting. I'll try my best to avoid them though.
:::For the most part I will rarely highlight something that I'm not sure on, but the accuracy system is definitely useful for editing. Now that a lot of Japanese speakers are involved in this though, I don't think it would be as necessary. I guess I'm just very eager to having something official and ready to be published. I'll use this system to my advantage anyway since it's a really useful one. --[[User:NefariousShyGuy|NefariousShyGuy]] ([[User talk:NefariousShyGuy|talk]]) 21:05, 13 September 2013 (EDT)
 
::::I hope you don't mind that I edited your post to be one block instead of interlaced with mine. It's easier to follow that way. [[User:Toomai|Toomai]] [[User talk:Toomai|Glittershine]] [[Image:Toomai.png|20px|link=User:Toomai/Bin|???]] The Incomprehensible 18:10, 14 September 2013 (EDT)
 
== Permission to rewrite the translations ==
 
[[SmashWiki:12TP/Smash_Bros._DOJO!!_01|I improved the translation of the first section at the 1st Dojo 64 page]], but I just don't like how limited the translation is because of the sentence-by-sentence structure. I understand it's for the sake of rollovers and resembling it to the original page, but it's possible to retain both of those features even if you translate it by paragraph with a bit of reformatting.
 
With that said, I ask that I rewrite the entire translation to make it more readable and friendlier to English speakers. I plan on translating it in the style of how the Brawl Dojo was translated. Although I can't keep the translation as literal as possible like you want, I will for sure keep the ''content'' of the sentences as literal as possible. Meaning, I won't alter any of Sakurai's words or have translation bias. I promise that this translation will keep the heart of the original Dojo 64 website, including the way it looks visually and the way Sakurai expresses his feelings on the subject. So please, can I just translate it in its entirety instead of by sentence?
 
Thank you, and sorry for the interruption. --[[User:NefariousShyGuy|NefariousShyGuy]] ([[User talk:NefariousShyGuy|talk]]) 16:50, 14 September 2013 (EDT)
:Let's see how it looks. [[User:Toomai|Toomai]] [[User talk:Toomai|Glittershine]] [[Image:Toomai.png|20px|link=User:Toomai/Bin|???]] The Orchestral 18:03, 14 September 2013 (EDT)
 
 
I just updated part of the first Dojo 64 page and made it more of my liking. What do you think? When compared to the original website in terms of layout, it's far from being an identical twin, but I think the material and content is pretty faithful to the original myself, and that's more important. --[[User:NefariousShyGuy|NefariousShyGuy]] ([[User talk:NefariousShyGuy|talk]]) 2:40, 21 September 2013

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