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Hey, can we slow down a bit and discuss this? [[User:Yo'ster|Yo'ster]] ([[User talk:Yo'ster|talk]]) 13:38, October 18, 2024 (EDT) | Hey, can we slow down a bit and discuss this? [[User:Yo'ster|Yo'ster]] ([[User talk:Yo'ster|talk]]) 13:38, October 18, 2024 (EDT) | ||
:Sure, do let me know what you feel should stay on the page. [[User:Mexi|Mexi]] ([[User talk:Mexi#top|talk]]) 14:10, October 18, 2024 (EDT) | :Sure, do let me know what you feel should stay on the page. [[User:Mexi|Mexi]] ([[User talk:Mexi#top|talk]]) 14:10, October 18, 2024 (EDT) | ||
::For starters, "at the very bottom of " instead of "last": Was a small touch that was merely for variety, since "last" had already been recently used to refer to his tier placing. | |||
Next up, I replaced "100%" with 90% because I thought a double digit number would better sell the idea of the smash attacks being strong. Not a necessary change, though. | |||
"with forward and up smash being among the strongest" instead of "with forward smash being one of the strongest": Ganon's got a super strong up smash, too, so bringing that up alongside f-smash made sense to me. | |||
"exert immense pressure on platforms and ledges alike." instead of "cover an entire platform above him and hit ledge hangs with the front hit.": Just some wordsmithing. I think it's phrased better that way. | |||
Any issues with these 1st few? [[User:Yo'ster|Yo'ster]] ([[User talk:Yo'ster|talk]]) 16:27, October 18, 2024 (EDT) | |||