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Yeah, the "tone fixes" were mainly an attempt to compromise with what Ebrahim changed. I guess it does sound opinionated, but pretty much everything there is objectively true. Did you see what it looked like before Ebrahim edited that part? That version might be better. [[User:Yo'ster|Yo'ster]] ([[User talk:Yo'ster|talk]]) 17:58, May 22, 2024 (EDT) | Yeah, the "tone fixes" were mainly an attempt to compromise with what Ebrahim changed. I guess it does sound opinionated, but pretty much everything there is objectively true. Did you see what it looked like before Ebrahim edited that part? That version might be better. [[User:Yo'ster|Yo'ster]] ([[User talk:Yo'ster|talk]]) 17:58, May 22, 2024 (EDT) | ||
:I did try to adjust it to the best of my ability with my most recent update, so I think it works for now. In the future please remember the general rules of the Manual of Style's [[SmashWiki:Manual_of_Style/Words_to_Watch|"Words to Watch"]]; I usually refrain from adding strong statements, and if any summary feels like it's trying to convince me of a point too hard (eg. "This character has a fantastic unbeatable neutral game"), that is a good indication that the language is too strong. [[User:Mexi|Mexi]] ([[User talk:Mexi#top|talk]]) 08:09, May 23, 2024 (EDT) | :I did try to adjust it to the best of my ability with my most recent update, so I think it works for now. In the future please remember the general rules of the Manual of Style's [[SmashWiki:Manual_of_Style/Words_to_Watch|"Words to Watch"]]; I usually refrain from adding strong statements, and if any summary feels like it's trying to convince me of a point too hard (eg. "This character has a fantastic unbeatable neutral game"), that is a good indication that the language is too strong. [[User:Mexi|Mexi]] ([[User talk:Mexi#top|talk]]) 08:09, May 23, 2024 (EDT) | ||
;;Got it. I also noticed you were the one to change it earlier this month, and I was happy with the changes you made there, so reverting to that one could work, too, but then you'd have to redo the fluff trimming, so maybe not. [[User:Yo'ster|Yo'ster]] ([[User talk:Yo'ster|talk]]) 12:21, May 23, 2024 (EDT) | |||