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==Writing Style==
A lot of your edits seem to be missing the mark, either because your trivia is off or because your writing style is poor. We strongly suggest you read [[SW:MOS]] and [[SW:TRIV]] before making any further edits. Thanks! [[User:Black Vulpine|Black Vulpine]] ([[User talk:Black Vulpine|talk]]) 22:51, 26 April 2017 (EDT)

Good work. You're doing better already. Try to make all your edits in one go, however, rather than just hitting submit every time you change something on a page. Remember, you can see how your edit looks before saving it by using the '''Show preview''' button. Never forget to proofread. It makes it easier for you and for everyone else. [[User:Black Vulpine|Black Vulpine]] ([[User talk:Black Vulpine|talk]]) 23:04, 26 April 2017 (EDT)

Your edits on the [[Samus]] page have missed the mark again. In fact, you have repeated mistakes that we already talked about.
*Sentences should not be led with conjunctions like 'and', 'or' and 'but'. Use 'However', 'In addition' or 'Otherwise' instead. 
*In regards to the colours, saying 'is unable to use' is less readable and takes up more space than 'does not use'. 
Your efforts are appreciated, but [[SW:1RV|avoid making the same edits repeatedly]], as this is against wiki policy. If someone reverts your edits and you disagree with that decision, go to the article's talk page and write a new section. [[User:Black Vulpine|Black Vulpine]] ([[User talk:Black Vulpine|talk]]) 23:31, 29 April 2017 (EDT)
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