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| alexssb [[User:Alexssb|Alexssb]] ([[User talk:Alexssb|talk]]) 19:07, 30 December 2018 (EST) | | alexssb [[User:Alexssb|Alexssb]] ([[User talk:Alexssb|talk]]) 19:07, 30 December 2018 (EST) |
| :I'm sorry to address this so late! The line corresponds to "On that day, when the sky fell away, our world came to an end", and I had completely missed the "in our eyes". It's a bit confusing since it could either be following up on the previous line ("the sky fell away before our eyes") or preceding the next line ("before our eyes, did a fading sun rise..."). I've added the line in question and tried to keep it somewhere between the two, but if there's anyone more knowledgeable in Japanese than I am, a more proper translation would be appreciated. ~ [[User:Serena Strawberry|<span style="color: #e68;">'''Serena Strawberry'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Serena Strawberry|talk]]) 21:40, March 4, 2020 (EST)
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